Waste Love Comments

Waste Love no more, for you have found the one, God's blessing rains on you, your loneliness is done. Well, written, very heartfelt and touching.

Hello Wolfey, Remarkable poems... A thin sincere portrait... It is simply surprising, that did not read earlier... 10...... Tsira

it is very very sad poem..... Sir you are so brave to write these things down.... good luck Hataw

i love this poem it relates back to one of my old relationships i think

Very good rhythm to this poem. Wonderful construction and content.

And don't leave out the parting words, The ones some always fear. The ones, somehow devoid of truth; Which make it oh so clear. I have heard those words, empty of all but lies... 'It's not you, It's me' or 'You deserve better' Never love and you'll never ache... Yeah right I like

The note that says someday I'll find The girl who knows my worth. ah yes... reading this the words of a good friend of mine (who is not much of a lady) just came to mind... 'Patronising gits! ' (and then in the middle of it - I smiled at something I could relate to) ... It's only those I've never loved; Who love me, don't you see. BRILLIANT poem ;)

In my opinion this is a really good poem really intresting I really enjoy reading it, thanks for sharing your work with us.

I have but one more thing to state. Perhaps if you used some metaphores in this poem, it would make it more interesting and keep the people guesing.

I am who still young have not yet exsperienced what you have now just descibed. But this poem does speak to the heart. This is a very good piece, the ryming sceme was perfect, this poem gave me mixed feeling! Good job! I also like how you used words that are sorta childish to the eyes of adults, such as: Dump. Once again good job, I have found nothing wrong with this poem!

A genuine love never goes waste!

I liked your point of viewing, that's a beautiful poem too... but as I said, love can be many things depeding on what you're feeling or living, love can be the sword that cuts your heart in two or the only reason you have to smile... nice poem

It's only those I've never loved; Who love me, don't you see. I can definitly relate to that. :) and I've used some of those methods mentioned above once or twice...well, this poem really puts the whole love thing in perspective. nice job.

A beautiful poem on 'Waste Love' with a streak of optimism.

'Anyone would be lucky to have you, but you're just not my type - sorry! ' JK! This is a great poem, Wolfey, and you certainly put it into words we all understand. FYI - you guys aren't the only ones who get rejected, although I'm a bit more particular now than I used to be. I do the rejecting now. Can't see staying in a relationship that's just going nowhere. I was thinking as I read, I could have written this myself! Great job! Linda :)

Half and half makes 10! Turn you down? Do I plead, bleed or tease? ? ? xx

this poem really spoke to me. i can really feel the power in this poem. good-job

Don't be afraid to turn me down. It never has been free. And I'm prepared to pay the price, The cost of loving thee. WOAH i Like this part ALOT ^_^