Sunday, January 15, 2012

Wasn'T I.....? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was under the impression,
That you were loving me.......
Wasn't I just up your street?
Wasn't I the canary of your bougainvillaea?
...
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Dead Leaf 30 January 2012

Great....I am speechless..... SUPERB LINES

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Neetha Sasidharan 20 January 2012

wow///// mindblowing poem...really grt...nice usage of words..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2012

Wasn't I the better half of your heart? Or was I the bitter whole of your life? .....you were perfect in your art, well behaved from the start, ideally suited for role, will you wait for call? .....10.. nic epoem

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Aditi Khandelwal 17 January 2012

i really like the last 2 lines... Nice write aditi

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