we sat in Washington Square Park
on a slatted wood bench in the sun
your hair was tied back
and your face flushed pink with little beads of sweat
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I wrote a piece of poetry based on Lee's poem. My poem, First Kiss Blues, was added here on poemhunter.com then /poem/ then first-kiss-blues/ and has recently been accepted for publication here in the UK. Thanks, Lee.
great! ! highly magnetical writing........good mems are to be cherished for ever. so it repeatedly haunt with more power.. rgrds/salu
hmmm soo cute..........much true.....all do cross such incdnt n life....10+++ sebastine
A good write indeed, Lee. It's very true, every event in life is unique and not to be repeated. There may be many similar ones but, never another like the original. Best wishes Richard
I think you did a very good job on this poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for the invitation to read your poem. I really liked it. Different from most people and that's a good thing.
straight from the heart......straight to reach out with a straight forward approach to reality...painted well with words...
the words are real and come straight from the soul of the poet... beautiful painting and a memorable piece... loved it...
after reading this i can see why love is blind......it touched all the fibers of that day.....beautiful......
Flowing, smooth and unconstrained. Moments in time to remember, never to have again. Bittersweet.....10
Great poem! Don't worry. Nobody thinks one is a sissy if they tell their true feelings about someone they might love. God bless people with feelings-MJG.
In poetry nothing is more thrilling than writing a real experience as it really happened. This is just beautiful
I pray that Denis's poem is hugely successful, and that he'll send me a little gift for providing the inspiration. (or a big one if he gets rich) Seriously Denis, congratulations with your upcoming success. How can we obtain a copy of the publication?