Thursday, March 19, 2009

Washington Square Park Comments

Rating: 5.0

we sat in Washington Square Park
on a slatted wood bench in the sun
your hair was tied back
and your face flushed pink with little beads of sweat
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Lee Crowell
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Lee Crowell 03 July 2009

I pray that Denis's poem is hugely successful, and that he'll send me a little gift for providing the inspiration. (or a big one if he gets rich) Seriously Denis, congratulations with your upcoming success. How can we obtain a copy of the publication?

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Denis Martindale 03 July 2009

I wrote a piece of poetry based on Lee's poem. My poem, First Kiss Blues, was added here on poemhunter.com then /poem/ then first-kiss-blues/ and has recently been accepted for publication here in the UK. Thanks, Lee.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 May 2009

I've read this yet again.I love it.

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Salu Salu 23 April 2009

great! ! highly magnetical writing........good mems are to be cherished for ever. so it repeatedly haunt with more power.. rgrds/salu

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Sebastine Humaemo 31 March 2009

hmmm soo cute..........much true.....all do cross such incdnt n life....10+++ sebastine

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Lily Law 27 March 2009

Well penned.. No one can escape from Love... ^-^

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C.R. Clark 26 March 2009

A good write indeed, Lee. It's very true, every event in life is unique and not to be repeated. There may be many similar ones but, never another like the original. Best wishes Richard

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Sally Plumb 25 March 2009

Brilliant, you big softie.

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 24 March 2009

Expressed your feelings well.

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Chelsi Ruffing 23 March 2009

I think you did a very good job on this poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

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Ted Sheridan 23 March 2009

Thanks for the invitation to read your poem. I really liked it. Different from most people and that's a good thing.

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Malini Kadir 23 March 2009

straight from the heart......straight to reach out with a straight forward approach to reality...painted well with words...

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Dr Kamran Haider 23 March 2009

the words are real and come straight from the soul of the poet... beautiful painting and a memorable piece... loved it...

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Kizza Michael 23 March 2009

after reading this i can see why love is blind......it touched all the fibers of that day.....beautiful......

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Patrick McFarland 21 March 2009

Nice work here Lee... 10

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Linda Moore 21 March 2009

Flowing, smooth and unconstrained. Moments in time to remember, never to have again. Bittersweet.....10

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Ency Bearis 21 March 2009

enchanting verses..well penned a great one...

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Michael Gale 21 March 2009

Great poem! Don't worry. Nobody thinks one is a sissy if they tell their true feelings about someone they might love. God bless people with feelings-MJG.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 21 March 2009

In poetry nothing is more thrilling than writing a real experience as it really happened. This is just beautiful

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 March 2009

I loved it and lived it 10

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