Sunday, January 15, 2012

Washed Up Tablecloth Comments

Rating: 4.3

My single purpose has come to an end,
And yet I continue to work.
My tattered wrinkled self intends,
To finish free of murk.
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Francis Tikava
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Victoria Gauci 20 January 2012

Wonderful. It's very good.

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Carlton Briganza 20 January 2012

haha.. Nice: -) It ends on a happy note, I liek that...

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Matthew Holloway 17 January 2012

nice flow simply honesty, good write

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Seeyan Abdulgafoor 16 January 2012

easy words, yet they have a powerful meaning

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Wahab Abdul 15 January 2012

indeed a nice poem...nice words..good flow..i like the poem..high marks...i like it keep it up..please read my poems

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