Washed Garden Comments

We made mistake and shall repent with determination on no repeating the same. Poet wrote such a truth in human misdeed yet believe in soul redemption because God is The Most Merciful with ultimate compassion towards man-kind and never stop giving chances to all.

wonderful religious and didactic poem at the same time....wonderful words expressing deep thoughts...God bless...Mari.

Dear friend, This poem contains a lot of wisdom. Sometimes we tend to be too connected to our earthly possessions and forget the spiritual dimension. I do not like vey much the phrase 'God is tired, give Him a rest'. Any personification of our Creator is a bit degrading (that is at least what I feel) . Otherwise a great poem with lots of spirit. The rhymes within the verses are very good.

Gregory, this is so beautiful! This is true''living in the Spirit.'' I pray to be continually washed by the Word, and that He blow afresh upon His garden continually. Another inspired poem! ; D

‘The love of CHRIST, the faith to receive and a desire to obey, does purify’ ~ to me it is the bottom line of your poetry… The whole gamut of social religious moral interpersonal relations and action nicely embodied...in this lovely and wise poem … thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10