Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Was Your Love Just A Dream? Comments

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Was your love just a dream.....
Did it ever belong to me?
Or was it a breeze whispering to the trees,
Those words spoken so tenderly?
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Lora Colon
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Crystal Pierce 28 March 2015

I really liked the last stanza. It touched me.

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Crystal Pierce 28 March 2015

This is a really good poem. If you don't mind Lora Colon could check out my six poems, please? I'm in need of inspiration would you please comment on mine or send a message?

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Stephen Katona 25 March 2015

I like your idea of drinking from the well. Of course sometimes the well hasn't dried up, one may just need a new bucket.

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David Lessard 20 March 2015

Love's a dream anyway you slice it. Nice poem.

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Darlene Walsh 18 March 2015

The past, especially past love, can seem like a dream... forevermore. A lovely poem. Darla :)

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Lora Colon

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