Sunday, May 3, 2009

' Was Never Mine............' Comments

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Was never mine............


Everything was him;
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Saadat Tahir 03 May 2009

age old agony of unfullfilled love...nicely penned at the peril of brevity...like me you write long poems at times but then what to do sometimes one just wants to go on an on...cant dtop the flow of ideas great cheers

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Divij C 03 May 2009

nice one could have been a bit rhythmical

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