Save us Telemachus! won't you?
Save us Shadwell, well, won't you?
Save us, save us, save us babies;
Save us citizens save us, save us.
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A thought provoking poem from your mightier pen. You have portrayed all the character of Bhagavtha into our current situation we are facing. This means, this epic was written so many years back, that these characters existed at that time, and continuing till today. Krishna role was of a sarathi, who only guide others, but he didnt pick up any weapon. Well in our today, we follow our soul as a guide, or we follow someone who influences our thoughts. But sure there is a guide, or we follow our own instincts, not necessary it is correct, that is the main difference. I loved reading it. In fact, I love to correlate anything with our life, to understand in a better way. Loved the way you presented it and made me too think a lot in this topic. Thanks a lot for sharing with us.
An unusual submission that has got a didactic power all throughout. The Krishna angle of the thought developed has its newness.But the tale cannot infuse a spirit that works on the minds asleep or dead. Maoists in A.P are a new brand and are almost invisible as of now. Thank you for the invitation. We have to read each other and go ahead though...
A wonderful poem with a broad canvas of characters linking to Lord Krishna ! !
'Glittering teeth of thirty percent Make the seventy, waning crescent'......How true! Such ever widening inequalities often force people to take up arms and turn them into Naxals and Maoists! ! A poem made forceful with pungent social criticism .
Lack of necessities of life like food clothing house and a peaceful life with dignity, and proper education makes a man Maoist. The government should realized this. Very good poem. thanks.
No rice, no fuel, no gruel to feed Prices shoot up at rocket speed Glittering teeth of thirty percent Make the seventy, waning crescent. very good poem. thank you for the poet's notes. tony