Thursday, July 31, 2008

Was It Real Or I Was Dreaming? Comments

Rating: 4.7

when i was listening to my heart's beating
i woke up by a knock on the door
my heart stopped; i felt afraid
i wondered, i asked: who's that?
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Anna Jonson
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Sonali Ganguly 31 March 2016

loved the poem..... very nice

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Celia Amantea Schulz 01 November 2015

Yes profound feeling...a few words seem out of place but the idea is right there

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Anita Sharma 12 September 2015

profound sadness..loved it

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Charity Nduhiu 24 August 2015

Anna, this is so sad for you sometimes things don't happen the way we plan. Please dont kill yourself. I like the poem

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

this speaks in volumes and has a profound impact to it..wonderful work u amazing!

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James Mclain 15 April 2009

Things by now have changed the rivers flow to you as well heart a knock the door lashed shut not knowing gone a name to bring in home of hearts released... :) ..iip

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Jhon Fernandis 08 November 2008

wooooooooooooooooow i like this this is a true poetry having lots of feeling expression and have a lucid way so all of that i like this poem i like you'r poem 1,2,3 and 5 but i hasnot read this poem now i will read this poem next time and then i will give some comments i am going to add you as a friend

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<font color=black>Nagourta 10 October 2008

That's so sad. I am so glad that it hasn't happened to me. I would be...*sound*

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Chrispin Kamara-Johnson 08 October 2008

Nice one Anna i love this one especially. great job.

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Manonton Dalan 05 October 2008

men don't cry so it must be a dream. thanks for living to write such beautiful poem. thanks.md

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Little Hatila ;) 03 October 2008

mm, it was great if you were just dreaming but since it was real it is really sad...but rember always smile.... i give 10 your sister: Hataw

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Egi David Perdana 02 October 2008

you like me, I remember oen moment but I don't know is really or dreams, keep up dude! , this nice

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Mehedi Faysal 28 September 2008

a great composition...thanx 'Anna Jonson ' for sharing your amazing work with us..some time we cant control our life..poet reflect this thing with few emotional lines...10 for it

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Aijaz Asif 27 September 2008

are u realy 15 or am i dreaming too..lol....thanks good poem...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 September 2008

It is a beautiful poem, very nice. I love it.

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Allan Macli Borges 19 September 2008

Anna, you're just great... keep always writing please...10++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2008

heart-felt expression......yet without love we can't live.........10

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 06 September 2008

good written.. it shows the truth which one has to face one day certainly.when they loses sb or sth.........

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Life is a very precious gift.Everyone lives with sorrow and joy.When I feel depressed I think of all the funny things that have happened to me and then my spirits lift.This was a moving poem.Sorry for your loss.Peace be with you.

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Aiden Howarth 03 September 2008

Very moving! I like the title very much! Please keep writting and let me know the next time you post new work, i will lovingly read it! Aiden howarth

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