when i was listening to my heart's beating
i woke up by a knock on the door
my heart stopped; i felt afraid
i wondered, i asked: who's that?
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Yes profound feeling...a few words seem out of place but the idea is right there
Anna, this is so sad for you sometimes things don't happen the way we plan. Please dont kill yourself. I like the poem
this speaks in volumes and has a profound impact to it..wonderful work u amazing!
Things by now have changed the rivers flow to you as well heart a knock the door lashed shut not knowing gone a name to bring in home of hearts released... :) ..iip
wooooooooooooooooow i like this this is a true poetry having lots of feeling expression and have a lucid way so all of that i like this poem i like you'r poem 1,2,3 and 5 but i hasnot read this poem now i will read this poem next time and then i will give some comments i am going to add you as a friend
That's so sad. I am so glad that it hasn't happened to me. I would be...*sound*
Nice one Anna i love this one especially. great job.
men don't cry so it must be a dream. thanks for living to write such beautiful poem. thanks.md
mm, it was great if you were just dreaming but since it was real it is really sad...but rember always smile.... i give 10 your sister: Hataw
you like me, I remember oen moment but I don't know is really or dreams, keep up dude! , this nice
a great composition...thanx 'Anna Jonson ' for sharing your amazing work with us..some time we cant control our life..poet reflect this thing with few emotional lines...10 for it
are u realy 15 or am i dreaming too..lol....thanks good poem...10
Anna, you're just great... keep always writing please...10++
heart-felt expression......yet without love we can't live.........10
good written.. it shows the truth which one has to face one day certainly.when they loses sb or sth.........
Life is a very precious gift.Everyone lives with sorrow and joy.When I feel depressed I think of all the funny things that have happened to me and then my spirits lift.This was a moving poem.Sorry for your loss.Peace be with you.
Very moving! I like the title very much! Please keep writting and let me know the next time you post new work, i will lovingly read it! Aiden howarth
loved the poem..... very nice