Monday, November 23, 2009

Was It All Comments

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Was it all
Such this way
Despair.
Sadness weakening
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Whisper Dawn
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Michael Gale 23 November 2009

Yes-was it all, so suddened mad? ...was it all so suddened bad? Was it all so, shallow this life? ...Was she bad, this one-My wife? Did she fling full force into my heart? ...When she left me to depart? That jagged edged knife ripped me far...As she left me, in my car. Was it bad, her maddening pain? ...Which-in the end, upon me landed like, as rain. This pain so hard to fathom sad...Was by all accounts-Her unpardoned-Bad! Your poem was a ten to muse me like this. God bless us all-MJG.

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