Was It A Trance? Comments

Very interesting thought. I used to be hungry a lot, I know the feeling, but in reality everything means something. We eat food which is equal to spiritual food. We starve when we are stagnating somewhere and we do not have the opportunity to learn. It is just a passing time. The more wisdom you want to pick up, you will have more food. However, many people are overweight, because what they learn not able to digest.

i thought this was a very good poem it is full of mystery and passion and full of power. good job :)

it may be vivid portrayal of social reflection deeply acting upon the human psyche by the plight of child in the niche of our society, at times it predominates over our mind riling by the grueling facets of diversities, still a humanistic approach, well penned, thanks for sharing

To be there To be there I saw yesterday I get today I will be free from tommorow

very good actually full of mystery

Powerful..Thought Provoking....Good Work Rahul...

A nice write. Continue!

wonderful confessional poem, well expressed ideas

Trance perhaps is strictly a psychological word, that means, it carries a meaning which relates with the psychology. Your thoughts in this writing have been very much diversified, so it is not trance, it is a conscious making standing amidst the time of so many mal-factors you do experience in everyday life. So my poet friend, you just try to illustrate some more trances standing against the superficial tides of contemporary time. Thank you much, Write more......Run long......... 10+ Apoet Bangla

Well written...expresses different emotions indeed.

Rahul, I gave it a nine. At sixty years of age it is a trance you will never recover from in this day and age!

Yes really provocative poem, provocative questions and provocative seeking the answers! But not only provocative but also rousing of one!

Amazing stuff. Not 150% what I'd usually go for being that I'm ever the simpleton but it's really amazing! It really gets you thinking in a deep and open minded way. Very inspiring too. :)

A well written poem that expresses different actions and emotions and their parallel opposites (Plutarchian) . Keep up the good writing, Rahul.