Sunday, January 18, 2009

Wars Never End. Comments

Rating: 5.0

wars never end,
one finished another one began,
wars never end,
today and tomorrow there is no end,
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JOSE MURGUIA
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Jerry Hughes 02 March 2009

Couldn't agree more Jose, war is murder, Jerry

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C. P. Sharma 14 February 2009

jose, But through wars no one ever won, Man has become victim of his gun. CP

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Sunflower Field 13 February 2009

'wars never end' was placed throughout the poem to give emphasis good job.

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Kranthi Pothineni 13 February 2009

A truth on wars...short and good

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Drea Dream 06 February 2009

i like it. its simple and gets to the point. great job

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Mona Martinez 20 January 2009

well put loved it. so short but, yet has a point.

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Blue Sky 19 January 2009

I like how you can put a simple idea into an artistic poem. I envy your skills. Wars shouldn't happen because even if there's victory, there are still people crying over the lost loved ones.

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Patti Masterman 19 January 2009

So true. They should put this on billboards all over the planet.

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