Sunday, January 15, 2017

Wars Comments

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War is a business,
Invented by man,
Slay, the other,
Take from him
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Sandra Feldman
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 January 2017

Awesome and true. War is only for selfish material gains and profit. Kudos for that and the rhyming too. Nice to read from your poetic pen again.

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Mj Lemon 15 January 2017

Sandra, you make a seamless transition between business and war.That truly is reality, and you have captured that in verse. Really well done!

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