Warrior Without Head Comments

It is a beautiful poem with a lot of meaning! I really loved it! Keep up the good work!

History may have legend stories and the proof We can’t discount theory and remain aloof It may not sound well with changing scene

We find warriors in present days also Jumping in fray without thinking so

Jaishikhri (name) fought battle for three days Headless with swords and shield and found ways Killing as much enemy as he could possibly do

Indian history is full of such tales Heroic struggle waged by the males Females offering self immolation for honor To save dignity as need of an hour

We find warriors in present days also Jumping in fray without thinking so May not calculating what would be the damage

We find warriors in present days also Jumping in fray without thinking so May not calculating what would be the

Jaishikhri (name) fought battle for three days Headless with swords and shield and found ways

We find warriors in present days also Jumping in fray without thinking so

Indian history is full of such tales Heroic struggle waged by the males Females offering self immolation for honor

Have we become soft or gone insane? Have all our efforts are futile and gone into vane?

History may have legend stories and the proof We can’t discount theory and remain aloof It may not sound well with changing scene

It may not sound well with changing scene Never heard warrior fighting without head and seen

History may have legend stories and the proof We can’t discount theory and remain aloof It may not sound well with changing scene

We find warriors in present days also Jumping in fray without thinking so May not calculating what would be the damage

What is modern way of facing crisis? Do we roam aimlessly without thesis? How long can we endure and fight?

You manage to maintain the Suspence through the Title. Great job to attract Readers/ A Dramatic poem which tells Truths. It deserves TEN

We find warriors in present days also Jumping in fray without thinking so

Have ewe become soft or gone insane? Have all our efforts are futile and gone into vane?

Have ewe become soft or gone insane? Have all our efforts are futile and gone into vane? Simply because it is without application of mind