Drenched from stormy rain
Soaked in soul's tears
Weary from warring
Poets quench their thirst
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Love your opening comment, Pallavi! THX so much for believing it to be brilliant.
Cynthia, I very much appreciate your comment because that's precisely what I've been striving for with my poetry. THX so much!
The whole series is going to be very philosophical, my poetic friend!
Brilliant poem, Like in sea I am thirsty with all sour water around. Good lesson learned. Full *****
Love your metaphor, Poetic Sky! Thank You so much for your very positive response and the full marks.
Observation is key to poetry, I concur with Martinez, once we are drenched in the subject we see our thoughts flowing in right direction, don't they? Thoughtful poem Friend Richard.5*****
Poet Martinez is right. Poets have a third eye, which never closes. Do they war…warrrrr? I don't know. I am here to " quench their thirst From nearby spring" of eternal sunshine of poetry. As you are, Richard. Thank you
Poet's have third eye to see same thing differently. Liked it RW.
In total accord with you on this one, Martinez. As poets, our third eye provides divergent perspectives. And extraordinary empathy! Poet Martinez, Thank You so very much for your very insightful comment which was appreciated by Asim, Poet Menon and myself!
I like to get the poetic juices flowing not with a nearby spring, but with an occasional Budweiser! ! Great poem Richard
I do too, David! For me, European beer tastes far superior! Glad that you liked the poem.