Cut skin,
Matching Tattoos,
Alluring night,
Tantalizing moon,
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I really liked this one. The first few lines drew me in...Matching tattoos! Yikes. :) Sounds like one person moved on, grew up and the promises weren't kept. A lot came through in just a few words. I love poetry like that!
My water keeps running in my tube, l need to fix that. Interesting poem! !
A wish made by so many of us... but then you realize that you don't want to miss out on future promises and suffering. This is a brilliant poem. One of the best I have read recently. GS