Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Warped And Twisted Comments

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Harsh words that easily flow,
Hidden secrets that nobody knows,
Cuts bleeding, burns blistered,
Deep inside I’m warped and twisted,
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Darren Harris
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*Trusting You* 07 December 2008

Never sleeping, but choking on a dream, While listening to my silent screams, I call my mind but the numbers unlisted, that is true poetry right there... I really enjoyed it a lot. you done a great job on this. I will add it to my favs. Crystal

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Saint Cynosure 22 October 2008

This is very good Darren... I have enjoyed it immensely.

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Silence Dogood 22 October 2008

Not bad I like how you repeat the line warpsed and twiasted very good

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Darren Harris

Darren Harris

Leeds, england
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