Warp Speed Comments

Nice narrative. Enjoyed reading. Great language skill. Simple but effective

Your glosses on post-millennial slang are helpful, and they're giving me confidence that I can read the new generation's work. When I came across the word 'channel, ' I had a feel for it. I hazarded a guess that it meant something like PROPITIOUS CIRCUMSTANCES. Your gloss proves I wasn't far wrong.

Sorry to say, my comments do not appear in the order I made them. Evidently those packets of data were routed in divergent ways on the Web, some more roundabout than others. They ran a race and arrived in a different order than when they started.

Maybe 'idle' reading is undisciplined activity. But maybe it's also like a middle finger toward systems of hyper-discipline.. Maybe idle reading helps to keep the pour-able state in circulation. To contribute to such an entrancement would be no small thing.

I suppose people since ancient times have been making themselves quasi-bionic with systems of hyper-discpline. But nowadays the professional careers have really upped the ante on that.

I think it's intriguing that the hyper-disciplined state can alternate with the pour-able. There is an aesthetics of how things fade in and out.

Undisciplined readers don't know what such a firing process feels like. Meanwhile, telling about it would help the teller re-pour herself into undifferentiated form periodically. And the female voice, or any individual voice, probably benefits from challenges.

Clay gets kneaded and put in the kiln one way or another. Those in the fancy set, after a couple of twists, will find that commiting oneself to a pretzel shape is also strenuous. Materialism requires more material.

On the mild days it will be like a firing kiln, or else a drop forge. There will probably be a drill sergeant type. Worst of all, you may become your own drill sergeant. Will you hector yourself?

Even though it's doable, you're letting yourself in for a pretty formidable undertaking. All that knowledge you'll acquire will amplify your reach like a cyborg, maybe like a power-assisted exoskeleton. It's good to get a sense of who the undifferentiated you is, while you're still pourable.