Saturday, December 31, 2022

Warp And Weft Comments

Rating: 5.0

Warps are laid
So are the wefts!

Two more poems
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Alyx True Edge 22 September 2024

Haha, beautiful context story! It is exactly this intangibility of the pattern released by the momentary images and thoughts coming to the conscious mind, poetry can be pure, spontaneous, unplanned expression. Thank you! 5/5

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Indira Renganathan 18 April 2023

Like the usage of warp and weft....wish you a long bright poetry journey

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It is a matter of extreme pride to note the good you have written of the poem. Thank you

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 07 March 2023

A beautifully written, interesting poem.5 stars.

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Delighted, Evelyn. Thank you

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Susan Williams 06 March 2023

This is charming! ! ! And I am enchanted by the metaphor! ! ! 5 stars and an enthusiastic fav

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Thank you, Susie. I am very happy that you are able to find time to catch up on my poems.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2023

I concur strongly to the 3rd stanza of this beautiful Poeme. So well expressed. Congratulations for your wonderful Poetry.

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Delighted to read your note. Thank you.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 01 January 2023

Nice confident introspection. May you complete 1000 poems in 2003

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Thank You, Kesav. May I wish you too a creatively fulfilling year ahead, dear poet.

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Rob Lamberton 01 January 2023

Your poem reminds me of another with the line, " unraveled at birth"

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What was that poem? I have not seen it. Could share its link? Thank You

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Rob Lamberton 03 January 2023

You can find it here on poem hunter written by Keilani Poetry. Your titles are the same.

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Thank You, Rob. I have just read it. It is a marvellous piece of poetry. Thank You for guiding me to it.

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Rob Lamberton 01 January 2023

"Two more poems And it'd make Six hundred" Before the year end."

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I wrote this and shared to please my beloved. She said, "if

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I wrote this poem to please my beloved. She said, "if you tried, you could cross the 600 mark before the New Year". But she hardly knows the waywardness of Poetry's.

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David Wood 01 January 2023

And you are right, I never think of numbers either, and I delete some after I've posted them.

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Thank You, David. This was a made out poem, just to please my wife. And thank you for reading it.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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