Saturday, May 14, 2022

Warp Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the skies do warp,
where does life seek refuge
but for in its own cocoon!
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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M. Asim Nehal 15 May 2022

Terse... to sum-up at once. Nicely thought. *****

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Grateful to, Dr Nehal for "terse" analysis of the poem. Loved it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 May 2022

It's a great poem.... appreciated the very core of this poem. Top score!

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Thank You, Dilipji. I have been a great admirer of yours. And your words are really valuable to me. Thank You

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Bri Edwards 15 May 2022

A cocoon, a loaf of bread, a bottle of wine, and thee; what else could I wish for? Oh, yeah: a bowl of ice cream; make that TWO bowls! bri ;)

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Loved your comments. The way you appreciate my choice of words. Thank You Bri

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 May 2022

Wonderful I really like it Please read and comment on my poem Anderson DCCCXLIII

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It is a pleasure to read your comments on my poem. And equally happy to read your poem. Thank You

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When heavens disown, one turns an orphan, as if alone on earth, when it pours…..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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