Friday, September 4, 2020

Warning Signs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Warning signs drift on
The wind. Darkness is draining
The flowers' colours.
Malignant voices now sow
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Shaun Cronick 13 September 2020

Very borderline Edgar Allan Poe. Just six lines Dominic but your dark message hits home. A poem portent for any reader to think about and the last three well written lines are so bible black. A full wicked, wicked score and so darkly disturbingly deserved. Thank you Dominic and you know how to really unsettle a reader.

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