Friday, February 29, 2008

Warning Signs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Caution yield right of way
Warning Danger
the signs were all blinded
by the sun in the sky
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Bonnie Collins
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Duh Huh 22 June 2009

Holy toledo Bonnie, this one gave me chills. It is obviously written with heartfelt passion. Thank you for sharing my friend, as always your talent is inspiring :)

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Andrew Blakemore 26 February 2009

A great piece of work Bonnie, I do like the way that you have used the highway as a metaphor for love. Very well written indeed. Love, Andrew xx

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Stacey Watts 27 September 2008

I like this poem. I tlike the way you used the road signs to protray what we all feel about love from time to time...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 29 February 2008

Make no mistake...The Ole cliche ''Love Is Blind'', is all too true to reality, and has no bias as to who this deadfall blinds.Great piece of work, young lady.Fluxive structure....Solid penning, indeed. ~ FjR ~

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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