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Tells a tale so enthralling.....

Our dreams can be carried on a cloud by the wind.

Reading this poem makes me wish to fly away with the winds like that white cloud defying mamma's warning!

It's a charming fairy tale with a message. The story is constructed and narrated very well.

very symbolic write Geetha, and very sound too! ! !

We must always be careful, a great poem.

metaphorically well arranged poem that give a shepherd call to all before fall nice and lovely poem Jaya