Friday, April 28, 2006

Warmth Is A Burden Comments

Rating: 4.9

I hear the classic verse of your rebuke.
The music of a constant, static bird
Crackles the gray indifference of the sky.
A winter bleach of sunlight stings the eyes.
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Sandra Fowler
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premji premji 03 July 2009

your words impart the warmth of poetry deep into my soul...........

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Sonya Florentino 18 June 2009

The intimacy is so poignant…. some of your poems are so cinematic Sandra...

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Jim Norausky 21 March 2009

So classic. I bow before your talent in respecr... Jim

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 November 2008

Astonishing imagery! Compact...........eloquent...........thoughtful indeed! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 16 July 2008

true...but a burden one loves to bear...'winning the landscape with poetry' is your usual trait, sandra 10

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James B. Earley 14 April 2008

'you tilt my face to catch the amber drops, '...........poignant indeed!

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Peter Stavropoulos 06 August 2007

Very powerful. I love the way you've combined personal (the subjective) feelings with landscape (the objective) near and distant. A true art.

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Elysabeth Faslund 05 August 2007

To comment on a work which has already been judged outstanding...redundant. One thing...such spiralings! up, down, then up again. Utah got one, damned fine! ! poem! ! xxElysabeth

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Brian Dorn 16 February 2007

Wow, Sandra... you've 'hammered' out one great line after another! 'Words of gold, ' (to borrow a phrase from your poem) ... priceless, in fact! ! Brian

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jack russell 07 January 2007

Your ability to tease feelings from closely woven words remains fascinating. I suspect there is more than a little bittersweet here, but your light always wins through in the end :) Best wishes. jack.

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Melvina Germain 06 January 2007

Great ilmagry displayed here Sandra in this most beautiful poem. A pure work of art, thankyou for sharing this beauty.---Melvina---

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Alison Cassidy 22 December 2006

How skilfully you use the imagery of nature to convey a moment of warmth and intimacy. You never reveal too much, but leave the reader to imagine... This is the voice of a true poet. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Kelly Hanson 18 December 2006

beautiful images. i felt so naked reading this - as if you read my soul.

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Cyclopseven R 18 December 2006

'My eyes record the image of that sound' -I like this phrase very much. A soul embracing poetry. Work of a refined mind.

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Goldy Locks 05 December 2006

really like this one. Trust it is an older one of yours. Like everything about it ~ essence, primarily. sjg

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Mary Naylor 27 November 2006

This poem is so beautiful, I'm at a loss for words. As always, imagery is incredibly rich and original. The third stanza stuns the reader with its beauty. Truly, your words open new worlds of visual and sensual experiences to the human mind!

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Ivy Christou 21 June 2006

well I'm a poetically warmed up to read more! I absolutely love the images you create, bravo! HBH

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R H 06 May 2006

Sandra, this is a poem I could read over and over. (And did!) Your poetry has a soul, what more can I say...except that I have to read it once more. Warmest wishes, Justine.

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Emma Johnson 04 May 2006

And who could help feeling imbued with warmth after reading your poetry, Sandra! A rapid succession of images that leaves one speechless. There are those paintings over which one needs to ponder for hours - your poem reminds me of those masterpieces. With Love, Susie.

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Will Barber 03 May 2006

I had to reread this, then again, then again. Your pentameter is supple, your imagery is just perfect. This made my day better.

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