Embers light the fire
Brake down the bark
Fueling heart and desire
Lost from the start
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This was sensational when you rhymed in this one. However, it felt as if you had dine with Pablo Neruda. BRAVO! ! !
well crafted, and great imagery. The ambivalence one feels between the warmth of a flame and the terror that fire can elicit comes thru to me anyway, similar to that of the warmth of true love and the fire that reality brings to a relationship. C'mon. baby, light my fire!