Monday, June 4, 2007

Warmth In Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Embers light the fire
Brake down the bark
Fueling heart and desire
Lost from the start
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Moth Harris
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Chris Mendros 09 June 2007

well crafted, and great imagery. The ambivalence one feels between the warmth of a flame and the terror that fire can elicit comes thru to me anyway, similar to that of the warmth of true love and the fire that reality brings to a relationship. C'mon. baby, light my fire!

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Raul Castelan 09 June 2007

This was sensational when you rhymed in this one. However, it felt as if you had dine with Pablo Neruda. BRAVO! ! !

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Marilyn Lott 04 June 2007

A beautiful sweet love poem! I loved it! Marilyn

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