Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Warmth Awaits. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shine me into your night, brighten
Your life with my gleams of lovelight.

Torch me deeply into your dark.
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Fay Slimm
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Yelena M. 06 November 2009

Your poem shines with light and warmth, indeed. Thanks for sharing, Fay. Yelena M.

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What a beautiful, warm, loving and positive poem Fay. The last two lines are a befitting conclusion to your strength and love. 10 Karin

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Susan Jarvis 28 October 2009

Every warm and heartfelt word compliments the title beautifully. A wonderful poem! S :)

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stunning display of artistic talent fay. just stunning.. :)

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Daniel Kempson 28 October 2009

One of your best Fay a true friend, Daniel 10

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Georgia Girl 28 October 2009

This is VERY nice and can be taken as a romantic poem or even as a friendship poem....you have such a wonderful way with words...10

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Stephen Stirk 28 October 2009

Simply beautiful work. Steve 10 ++++++

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Ian Bowen 28 October 2009

Fay, I always enjoy your neat and tidy work. Liked 'Torch me deeply' and the feeling this poem evokes.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Carol Gall 28 October 2009

warmth awaits lovly poem fay 10

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Fay Slimm

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