Shine me into your night, brighten
Your life with my gleams of lovelight.
Torch me deeply into your dark.
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What a beautiful, warm, loving and positive poem Fay. The last two lines are a befitting conclusion to your strength and love. 10 Karin
Every warm and heartfelt word compliments the title beautifully. A wonderful poem! S :)
stunning display of artistic talent fay. just stunning.. :)
This is VERY nice and can be taken as a romantic poem or even as a friendship poem....you have such a wonderful way with words...10
Fay, I always enjoy your neat and tidy work. Liked 'Torch me deeply' and the feeling this poem evokes.10/10 Regards, Ian
Your poem shines with light and warmth, indeed. Thanks for sharing, Fay. Yelena M.