Monday, June 5, 2017

Warming Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun drenched over the land
Through the slits in the sky
Ponds and rivers are drying
In hunger and thirst people are crying.
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Rini Shibu
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 06 August 2018

A heartwarming poem that would well deliver to the very cause it is aimed at. Global warming has turned to be the most alarming danger for our planet. Thanks dear Rini for the contribution. 10+++++

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Walterrean Salley 01 March 2018

Many don't take it to heart, until too late. Thanks for the awareness.

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Rini Shibu 01 March 2018

Thanks walterrean...your poems are amazing

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Bipasha D 14 January 2018

Thanks Rini for a poem on environment, a subject I am deeply passionate about.

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Rini Shibu 15 January 2018

It's our responsibility to save our earth.. Thanks Bipasha

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2017

slits in the sky, No air to breath lives are suffering., Climate changing and sea rising, Save earth..... a great cry from your poetic pen.......... surely it is our need now... thank you for making all conscious of this...... thank you dear poetess. tony

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Rini Shibu 27 December 2017

Thanks for your remarks Tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2017

The influences of sun on earth has been astutely and touchingly inscrbed by you dear Rini. It may be quoted..... In the warmth glaciers are melting Climate changing and sea rising Floods and storms are increasing Save earth stop this warming. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 02 December 2017

Thanks Kumar for your comment

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Akhtar Jawad 06 November 2017

SOS signal of earth heared by Rini Jerry well in time, she raised her voice and I join her but is it enough?

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Rini Shibu 06 November 2017

Thanks Akhtar for your remarks it mean a lot to me

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 October 2017

Teree hulkee phulkee muskrahat......jaan kitnoe ka legee....... kya ilm hain kisseee koe bhee....ktni jaane hain ley chukee..... teri muskaan aoouron kee....bun gayeee hai jaan...maann ya na maan...aaj sey hum bhe hogaye aapkay mehmaaan....lenee hai to laylo sahee...abhhe aouron kay saath humarre jaan bheee... abhee jee hahn abhee hee ]]]]]]]]]]KINDLY EDIT IT PLEASE.

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Rini Shibu 18 October 2017

Dear poet I am not good in hindi /urdu to do editing for this poem. Thanks for visiting my poem

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Saji G Praleyagiri 11 October 2017

Dear Rini, Ur. poem reflect the existence of earth and nature is really a W'arning to nature killers as explained in my poem 'Beings' Silent Request' may U read. Thank U. for sharing the poem.

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Rini Shibu 11 October 2017

Thanks sajid.. Sure will read your poem

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 23 September 2017

what have we done to mother earth. mankind has been suicidal therefore. self destruction mode. heal the world.

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Rini Shibu 23 September 2017

Thanks jabulani

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Sarah Mkhonza 08 September 2017

Thus is so So true. This poem tells the truth about the changing world.

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Rini Shibu 09 September 2017

Thank you so much Sarah for visiting my poem..

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Seamus O Brian 24 August 2017

It is tragic that the only beings on this planet capable of thinking, so often think only of the short-term. A compelling and vivid warning highlighting the consequences of such a narrow perspective. Well done, good poet!

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Rini Shibu 24 August 2017

Thank you so much Brian Rini

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Ravi Sathasivam 15 August 2017

Excellent.. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it.

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Rini Shibu 15 August 2017

Thanks Ravi....

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Cheryl Tutaan 08 August 2017

A power to change climate change! Really a nice poem to read and to share...thank you, Rini....++++++10

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Rini Shibu 08 August 2017

Thank you so much Cheryl for the comments

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Siddartha Montik 19 June 2017

Nice write of warming morning Sun shine! ..and yet with a subtle message for Nature awareness!

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Rini Shibu 19 June 2017

Thanks Siddhartha... Rini

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 June 2017

Hi Rini, Increasing Global warming, emission of green-house gases threat the very existence of life on our planet. But there are monsters like trump (of course, with a small t) who wish to ignore this. Your poem points to this most relevant contemporary issue. Nice work; very responsible write. Congratulations.. A 10+++

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Rini Shibu 18 June 2017

Thanks you..didn't expect the exit of US from paris climate accord.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 June 2017

your lovely poetry has been read by me now you need to read some of mine o pet ye

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Rini Shibu 17 June 2017

Sure dear poet

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 June 2017

congrats....really nice what a lovely poetic discovery

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Rini Shibu 17 June 2017

Thanks dear poet.. Rini

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Bharati Nayak 14 June 2017

Global warming is really a serious problem for the earth that your poem brings to focus.Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Thanks for reading my poem.. Rini

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Egwu Collins 14 June 2017

wonderful poem from a nice poet

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Rini Shibu 15 June 2017

Thanks Collins..

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Genova Maaa 13 June 2017

you love the mother earth and are afraid of the global warming..... very nicely portrayed and described the after effects of such a change in the climate....... thank u very much Rini..

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Rini Shibu 13 June 2017

Thanks Tony...

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