Sun drenched over the land
Through the slits in the sky
Ponds and rivers are drying
In hunger and thirst people are crying.
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Many don't take it to heart, until too late. Thanks for the awareness.
Thanks Rini for a poem on environment, a subject I am deeply passionate about.
slits in the sky, No air to breath lives are suffering., Climate changing and sea rising, Save earth..... a great cry from your poetic pen.......... surely it is our need now... thank you for making all conscious of this...... thank you dear poetess. tony
The influences of sun on earth has been astutely and touchingly inscrbed by you dear Rini. It may be quoted..... In the warmth glaciers are melting Climate changing and sea rising Floods and storms are increasing Save earth stop this warming. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
SOS signal of earth heared by Rini Jerry well in time, she raised her voice and I join her but is it enough?
Teree hulkee phulkee muskrahat......jaan kitnoe ka legee....... kya ilm hain kisseee koe bhee....ktni jaane hain ley chukee..... teri muskaan aoouron kee....bun gayeee hai jaan...maann ya na maan...aaj sey hum bhe hogaye aapkay mehmaaan....lenee hai to laylo sahee...abhhe aouron kay saath humarre jaan bheee... abhee jee hahn abhee hee ]]]]]]]]]]KINDLY EDIT IT PLEASE.
Dear poet I am not good in hindi /urdu to do editing for this poem. Thanks for visiting my poem
Dear Rini, Ur. poem reflect the existence of earth and nature is really a W'arning to nature killers as explained in my poem 'Beings' Silent Request' may U read. Thank U. for sharing the poem.
what have we done to mother earth. mankind has been suicidal therefore. self destruction mode. heal the world.
Thus is so So true. This poem tells the truth about the changing world.
It is tragic that the only beings on this planet capable of thinking, so often think only of the short-term. A compelling and vivid warning highlighting the consequences of such a narrow perspective. Well done, good poet!
A power to change climate change! Really a nice poem to read and to share...thank you, Rini....++++++10
Nice write of warming morning Sun shine! ..and yet with a subtle message for Nature awareness!
Hi Rini, Increasing Global warming, emission of green-house gases threat the very existence of life on our planet. But there are monsters like trump (of course, with a small t) who wish to ignore this. Your poem points to this most relevant contemporary issue. Nice work; very responsible write. Congratulations.. A 10+++
your lovely poetry has been read by me now you need to read some of mine o pet ye
Global warming is really a serious problem for the earth that your poem brings to focus.Thanks for sharing.
you love the mother earth and are afraid of the global warming..... very nicely portrayed and described the after effects of such a change in the climate....... thank u very much Rini..
A heartwarming poem that would well deliver to the very cause it is aimed at. Global warming has turned to be the most alarming danger for our planet. Thanks dear Rini for the contribution. 10+++++