Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Warmer Than Winter, Colder Than Summer Comments

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In summer, when the wishes of us grow up like a steeple,
When we feel the warm weather, and see happy people

All the sadness and all the bad things will gone
No one feels hard, the life of cruel people is done.
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Scotty Dogg 02 August 2012

This poem is 'just right'! ! ! ! Good job Ellias. S.

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Unwritten Soul 01 August 2012

Not too warm not too cold just nice and great advices there too..i know the meaning actually, Wabi Sabi and Sina were true, this this good and you done it in always good as u tried, keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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Sina Farajzadeh 01 August 2012

Good use of words dude. Great paradox in title. Keep going on.

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Wabi Sabi 31 July 2012

sound very clever! you know what is cozy in life. that tells that you are a good writer.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

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