Thursday, September 13, 2018

Warm Paraíso Nights Comments

Rating: 5.0

The nights in Paraíso
have their own distinct charm
warm and dark, comforting
They are like rich mayan chocolate.
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Nika McGuin
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Susan Williams 21 September 2018

filled with music and bits of chatter - blankets itself about me, - - -] now that is a pair of nifty lines that put your reader effortlessly into your shoes. excellent! ! 10

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Kim Barney 13 September 2018

Lovely poem, Nika. You evoke images with sight, sound, and taste. I really liked the rich Mayan chocolate line. Thanks for posting.

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