Saturday, January 31, 2009

...Warm Less... Comments

Rating: 4.7

Sun in the middle…so high
But..no rays warm the ground...
Feathers never reach the sky
And Silence is the only Sound...
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Sarah Ibrahim
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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Too short but very beautiful poem. 10 for this excellent work.

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Reetessh Sabrr 28 March 2009

i felt some incompleteness or may be i missed the gist, still i feel the incompleteness is the gist...

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Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2009

beautiful imagery in four lines Sarah...i liked this artful bit...10

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Water Lily 11 February 2009

very smart and and abstract ! I absolutely loved it!

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 09 February 2009

so cute and meaningful.....keep writing dear

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Sarah Ibrahim

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