Sunday, May 25, 2008

Warm, Balmy And Gentle Breezes Comments

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Warm breezes glide across an open space,
with such invisible grace,
as if they were off on a chase,
wafting softly against my face,
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Ernestine Northover
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Resplendent pictorial....In full efflorescence, here....as only Ernestine Northover Poetics knows how to pen....And this work, young lass....is a bonifide pen-gem! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 25 May 2008

Hey, hey, hey....it's Ernestine. Doing what Ernestine does best! Write 'classics'. You are soooo terrific.

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Andrew Blakemore 25 May 2008

A lovely piece again Ernestine and well done for adhering to this strict rhyming structure. Love Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 25 May 2008

I see the gentle breezes playing like young Children in the garden of your words Wonderful, fine poetry from a fine lady Love duncan X

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