Monday, September 11, 2006

Warm And Soft As Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

butterfly, are your
stripes and shades
a map to paradise?
if that is so, i am
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john tiong chunghoo
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 May 2014

Very beautiful, and very deep. This is some great poetry, quite amazing.

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Sandra Fowler 11 September 2006

The butterfly has fascinated poets for centuries. I like what Tagore said about them, 'The butterfly counts not months but moments, and has time enough'..Lovely work, John. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Debora Short 11 September 2006

Dear John, You have penned pure delight...this one goes, immediately, to my favorites list.

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Tranquil Ocean 11 September 2006

What a beautiful poem....gentle, soft and caressing in its notes. Love...TO

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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