Sunday, June 15, 2014

Warm And Clammy Comments

Rating: 5.0

All was silent in the air.
There was no breeze in sight.
Warm, clammy with the approach
of a misty warm night.
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Edwina Reizer
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Elena Sandu 24 June 2014

This is such a wonderfully crafted poem! These days when so many things are disconnected, tangled in speed, this poem seems to gift us a moment, teaching patience, self control, showing a harmony of human with the birds and trees. Having only a few drops of water while longing for a cold drink, brought this poem great wisdom and depth. Loving read, thank you for share!

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Saadat Tahir 20 June 2014

the lull before the storm..or...deluge a lovely graphic picture has been painted...in charming words liked

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