Saturday, February 20, 2010

Warm Comments

Rating: 4.8

A small flame,
just warm enough to keep me a alive.

You find me shivering,
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Joshua Wyatt
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Brenda Arroyo 16 March 2010

I absolutely adored this write. At the begining of it, I was in love, right there, with you... Feeling what you felt. The softness and warmth of it all... And at the end... I felt your hurt and pain. And I understood why you wouldn't want to stop it, even if it meant, ending your hurt. Amazingly done.

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Ray Schreiber 28 February 2010

Nice write...symbolism and circumstance open ended enough to allow a broad range of people to embrace this piece as speaking specifically to an experience they have had or are presently having.

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