********warlords (Blood Sky) (Lyric) ******* Comments

thats deep bravo brotha! ! pretty good im flippin through them

this is a beautiful ode to peace! even though it's written as a bash on war.. you are incredibly talented please never stop gifting the world with your words of love

This poem is a big protest against war and warlords. I hope these weapons of words will work.

a great write with collaboration with Sulaiman..both of you are talented and made this poem wonderful...thumbs-up 10 Ency Bearis

it is very very nice poem my friend also like it and thanks for writing coments

what a great collaboration....its a great and thought provoking piece....thanks for sharing 10++ a story of 2 beautiful minds met together and become one of kind changing the thoughts of world in a way through stories hidden in verses and rhymes

'Could you repay all the sins? Your sins are larger than the flames of Hell! How would you going to pay? ' Amazing amazing. 10+

hope one day i could hear this piece on a radio Egi...my cousin is a composer lyricist too...and i really appreciate your work...Great job! ! ! a 10

Hi my poetic pal.Thanks for the invitation to collaborate on this beauuuuuuuutiful piece.i 'd hope this piece could be like an evergreen piece of poetry which it could be remembered in years to come.Im honoured to have translated this piece to English Language and adding some spices to beautify it too.All the best to you in your quest Egi! ! !

A very vivid piece, filled with an excellent choice of words for the readers enjoyment, I not sure what it would sound to music, It should be intresting, thank you for sharing, David