Friday, July 22, 2016

War - Ww2 -The Eternal Patrol Comments

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The U-boat left the mouth of the French harbour
Under cover of darkness for these German Navy martyrs
To the North Atlantic they went to sink Allied shipping their bent
Their plan was to cut Britain's supply line of shipping without lament
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Paul Warren
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Impressive work...fluxive structural movement throughout... If you haven't already, you might consider posting out a series on this true story theme OF WWII. Solid crafting...~FjR-'16~

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Paul Warren

Paul Warren

ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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