Sunday, September 6, 2015

War - Ww1 - Diaries Of Dead Soldiers Comments

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Battered small handwritten notebooks
Just small enough to store in soldier's nooks
Pencilled papers in a script unclean
These books were written at times unseen
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Paul Warren
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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 07 September 2015

It was like watching a war movie. You have written in these superb lines what i see on screen for 2 hours.. I enjoyed reading this.

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David Wood 06 September 2015

We seem to be writing on the same wavelength. I've just a second ago submitted Beneath the Sea along the same lines. Lovely war poem I really enjoyed......10

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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