War-Worn Comments

I can see the grief on this soldiers face what he'd give for his mothers embrace death and wounded lay all around mortar shells and machine guns pound

wonderful.. though painful. i love the form you chose.....

You paint such a poignant but real picture of the weary soldier on the battle front.....

Good work! You smoked out most of the liberal wing on this site - those who will never accept the need for a just war, no matter the provocation! They are content to shed crocodile tears over almost any loss of life, except the millions of lives lost in the good old Soviet Union in its heyday!

a most powerful plea for peace

Great poem Fay, you care, a lot dont, shame 10 +++ Chris

an urgent message for peace... a touching verses..and pity for the innocent soldiers..involved in atrocity and hipocritic attitude of the leaders...nice write...10

A letter was the .........most He hoped to see ......of home. -------- touching poignant poem...one of the things a soldier can make his spirit burn and rise from the darkness of war is just a letter of love from home...NIce imagery and uniquely structured...10

War is evil. War is oft glorified but.............