Saturday, January 4, 2020

War Undeclared(Chain Verse) Comments

Rating: 4.6

War undeclared has been there existing,
From a seething anger underneath that grows.
Persistent and nurtured Hate boiling
Reaps the bitter grapes of wrath it sows.
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Cynthia Buhain-baello
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Kevin Patrick 23 January 2020

Revenge is the price of self-destruction. Truer words have never been spoken, congratulations for POTD!

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9ikkie 23 January 2020

This member poem of today i dare say beats all the others. Lovely structure too

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Bill Cantrell 23 January 2020

War is inbred in the bones of silence, leading the flesh by the leash of revenge...becoming a fate that is sealed with the signet ring of the past, great poetry...well deserving as poem of the day

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Lyn Paul 23 January 2020

" What is war good for" " Heal the world" Thank you Cynthia.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 January 2020

Hatred and war! ! ! ! Mankind on earth, Unable to move forward. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2020

Death to their foe has always been a part Of their people, their land, their lost nation. War undeclared, excellently captured, and well worded in this magnificent Chain Verse Fascinating poetic encouragement. I have enjoyed very much, CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as the Member Poem Of the Day! God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. PS. the added quote about HATE is very appropriate. A 10 Topscore for this marvelous persuading poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 January 2020

war, to kill conscience, empty jar! nation loses the dignity, the son, daughter, father, mother; everywhere a grievous game on the freedom name; freedom comes, but chained starvation-poverty never leave the tail of poor people shame! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Rajnish Manga 23 January 2020

Great poem. We do not know about the background against which it has been written but sentiments expressed therein are appealing to most people of the world. Besides, the chain verse and it's fine structure is awesome.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 January 2020

A well designed poem of the day. An amazing chain verse. Congrats, Mommy Cynthia on your featured piece...10++🤝👏❤️

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Cynthia Buhain-baello

Cynthia Buhain-baello

Manila, Philippines
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