Friday, July 17, 2015

War Sonnet Comments

Rating: 4.5

WAR I
Like worn-out clothes their bodies char
Fires from the frightful suckling barrels
Give them the glorious, gracious garlands
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Timothy Faboade
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Pamela Sinicrope 19 May 2016

Your images are so vivid, the words are difficult to read. The opening line captures the readers attention to the horror of war on the human body, then the lines of the sonnet continue on about the effects of war on the psyche of the individual and the country. The image at the end is chilling. Well done. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Tongues of the troubled real victims of Wars! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Tongues a the troubled real victims of Wars! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Fabrizio Frosini 17 July 2015

' Like worn-out clothes their bodies char ' the opening image well describe what ''war'' practically means

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