War - Senryu Comments

Truth spelt out wonderfully in a few words, succinct yet carries all the features of a war, full stars

Excellently expressed! .. Hearts that are ever so deeply filled with tears! .. Definite! .....5 Stars! ..+++++

Rat, rat, tat a tat....machine gun fire

War spells the end of the world for many lives. The dictator's mind, whose heart is taken over, can not be read…

Nothing is solved through war, accept death and devastation. The only thing won is a grave for millions. fantastic senryu Rose. Its message still rings true

True! War kills innocent lives, a sin covered by another sinful pair of words: 'Collateral damage'!

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Revered Rose Marie Mam, your poem is superbly worded and explains the decimating effect on people.loewst lows is the exact depiction. Thanks from my heart and best wishes for having shared.

Very true and depicting the current grave situation... well done...5* from me/pc

Yes, dear Rose! War is ever so depressing. A Senryu so poignant and insightful.....10

Heart-wrenching and of the highest order!

A Senryu full of Brilliance, excellently worded 5 Stars full score and much much more!

A war can never have a better definition than this one. How wonderfully you summed up about the war in this Senryu 👏 full stars...

War, a true and heartbreaking reality, so excellently described and felt n these great 3 lines.

So true, so true! No animal would do. what we have done and do to each other thru war.

.........lowest lows.......brilliant....thank u, dear poetess....

Thought provoking write. Yeah it is true.