Friday, July 31, 2009

War, Self-Created Comments

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The water flowing nicely
The current coming swiftly
The boat is floating steady.
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tara fortier
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Afzal Shauq 06 August 2009

These fish have lost the war with the rod in which im holding and i have lost the war in this world in which im living great and pictographic effects are found in this poem.. one can fel your rich idea and the expression is very much poetic and even melodic too..well done

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