Let me tell you a story,
Well, neither does it describe a hero's glory,
Nor does it exemplify how the lions roared,
As to new heights the hero soared.
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Chandini, That is nice. You are an excellent story teller. Very simple story, but kept me rooted till the end. The characters portrayed and sketched very vividly, by just a few strokes here and there. It is more like a caricature. Loved reading. 10+
This reads more like a short story than a poem, but a good read anyway. Thanks for sharing. Annette.
That was the idea Annette, I wanted to write something new, so I came up with this composition. Thank you for the compliment, anyways!
Wow- - sibling rivalry never ends.They are psychologically tuned to quarrel.Siblings quarrel to get more attention and more love from parents.In a family where there are more children, they fight among themselves and also through it learn sharing, adjustment and many social behaviors A nice poem.You brought out this human character through this beautiful poem.
Thank you ma'am!