Tuesday, June 28, 2016

War Of The Owen Sisters Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me tell you a story,
Well, neither does it describe a hero's glory,
Nor does it exemplify how the lions roared,
As to new heights the hero soared.
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Bharati Nayak 10 October 2016

Wow- - sibling rivalry never ends.They are psychologically tuned to quarrel.Siblings quarrel to get more attention and more love from parents.In a family where there are more children, they fight among themselves and also through it learn sharing, adjustment and many social behaviors A nice poem.You brought out this human character through this beautiful poem.

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Chandini Jaswal 11 October 2016

Thank you ma'am!

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 July 2016

Chandini, That is nice. You are an excellent story teller. Very simple story, but kept me rooted till the end. The characters portrayed and sketched very vividly, by just a few strokes here and there. It is more like a caricature. Loved reading. 10+

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Annette Aitken 28 June 2016

This reads more like a short story than a poem, but a good read anyway. Thanks for sharing. Annette.

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Chandini Jaswal 10 July 2016

That was the idea Annette, I wanted to write something new, so I came up with this composition. Thank you for the compliment, anyways!

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M Asim Nehal 28 June 2016

Ha ha ha, A nice story with sublime message............10++

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Chandini Jaswal 01 July 2016

Thank you so much! Glad to hear that you liked my poem!

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