We live
In a world
That was
here before us
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It All Started with unnecessary boundaries that made it seem as if the land is being shared, but ofcause that was not there case as it is now, nice massage Sir Dave The_African_Son
Brief but fantasticlly put together. This planet is an amazing treasure, but no matter what the greed of some threatens the balance, politics, ideology fanaticism, rob us of the great spirit this little blue wonder. Great work Mr. Walker
Exactly, the land should be shared, not owned, we as a people are just too greedy to see that. good job.
the Native Americans knew... earth is our mother, we are guests.. we own nothing! good poem!
Great write. War is nothing but wastage of time, money, peace and prosperity
Your poem goes deeper than you think the most harmonious people's of the world believe the converse, that they belong to the Earth. Once this is realised the need for war is significantly diminished. Well done.
For noman's land people fight wars. I think the poet had some military experience. Wonderful truth conveyed to the world!
Sir.. my poem less war more peace addresses the same issue... i would like to invite you to read it and give me feedback...
very very well said sir.... the day we understand your message.... our world will be a peaceful place with only love for one another....
Oh Fine piece. Congratulation. Yours Gajanan Mishra