Tuesday, February 28, 2012

War Of The Land Comments

Rating: 4.8

We live
In a world
That was
here before us
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Dave Alan Walker
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Gajanan Mishra 16 March 2012

Oh Fine piece. Congratulation. Yours Gajanan Mishra

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Verella Seleplith 13 March 2012

I find this very true, but its sad how it is..

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It All Started with unnecessary boundaries that made it seem as if the land is being shared, but ofcause that was not there case as it is now, nice massage Sir Dave The_African_Son

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Robert Green 03 March 2012

Good thoughts, well put in words.

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Kevin Patrick 02 March 2012

Brief but fantasticlly put together. This planet is an amazing treasure, but no matter what the greed of some threatens the balance, politics, ideology fanaticism, rob us of the great spirit this little blue wonder. Great work Mr. Walker

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Poet Of The River 02 March 2012

Exactly, the land should be shared, not owned, we as a people are just too greedy to see that. good job.

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Eric Cockrell 01 March 2012

the Native Americans knew... earth is our mother, we are guests.. we own nothing! good poem!

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Ramesh Rai 28 February 2012

Great write. War is nothing but wastage of time, money, peace and prosperity

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Danny Draper 28 February 2012

Your poem goes deeper than you think the most harmonious people's of the world believe the converse, that they belong to the Earth. Once this is realised the need for war is significantly diminished. Well done.

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Rajendran Muthiah 28 February 2012

For noman's land people fight wars. I think the poet had some military experience. Wonderful truth conveyed to the world!

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Ankit Mittal 28 February 2012

Sir.. my poem less war more peace addresses the same issue... i would like to invite you to read it and give me feedback...

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Ankit Mittal 28 February 2012

very very well said sir.... the day we understand your message.... our world will be a peaceful place with only love for one another....

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