Saturday, August 13, 2016

War Of Life (Senryu) Comments

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chinese immigrant~~
battling several dragons
one day at a time
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Gil Highlander 13 August 2016

The anglo saxon side of me will say Fight on and on: -)) But the battle for everyone is real! Great Senryu.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 August 2016

Somehow, i knew you might say that. Always wanting to be in control.: -))

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Yuko Onishi 13 August 2016

The struggle is so well captured by the term battling dragons. In life some problems are real others self made. Beautiful Senryu. Have you thought about publishing your work? Your collection is excellent!

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 August 2016

Thanks Onishi-san for your kind words. Will certainly explore that option.

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Ajit Kumar 13 August 2016

The struggles that people have to go through in life. Yet we crave for more. The plight of life well articulated.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 August 2016

Thanks Ajit, we are all suckers for pain.

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Kelly Kurt 13 August 2016

Me too. : -) .

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 August 2016

Hope you are doing well Kelly. Poor toad, may be in its next incarnation will be a great poet. Trust the summer is going well and the goddess of poetry is by your side.: -))

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