Sounds of thunder
wakes my soul
In the killing zone
we call this world
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Dave, you don't use a lot of words, but those you do use, you certainly use well to say what's important.
You never stop from stand for something, someone as it for justice..and high morality, that's make your poems so worth to read and a big piece to discover :) ..Hope sound of thunder not scare you but make you striking like it did...Great poem B.D_Unwritten SOul
in our ignorance, we kill what we do not understand... great, thought inspiring poem!
To be a Father To be a Son To be a Husband To be a brother To lose a love one 'How does that feel' 'It changes YOU' great read, thanks for reading me!
i can feel the emotion of this nice poem! !
Be silent! to violence we'll find there peace Live love and learn! ! A good poem! ! 10++
yours are good poem sir nice poem from the nice per son please read some of mine sir your comment is very necesary and important
I love this poem Dave... The act of violence shall never bring peace, the act of love and understanding is the only true path to peace... So for us humans, we may well be doomed. For I see no sign of either...
Nice piece there, ... Worthy to digest.. Bravo!
Very good poem Dave. I like your poems for its simile verse and clear connotation. Thanks. I invite you to read my new poems and comments. Yours Gajanan Mishra