Wednesday, July 6, 2016

War Loss Comments

Rating: 5.0

The long day had begun.
Every pleasure is forgotten.
Families and friends too.
And their children who, to this world, are new.
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Rajnish Manga 07 July 2016

Hats off to you, Dear Poet, for this powerful imagery surrounding the death of two soldiers who sacrifice their lives for their respective countries at war. The narrative leads us to sordid conclusions about human existence. Indeed a very thought provoking poem. I believe my eyes, the colour of their blood is red. They both born from their mother's wombs. And now, they both go to their tombs.

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Tarun Ram Kanuri 04 February 2019

Thank you, sir.

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Tarun Ram Kanuri

Tarun Ram Kanuri

Madhurawada, Visakhapatnam.
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