Saturday, August 15, 2020

War Is Everywhere Comments

Rating: 4.8

Whilst we sleep
When we wake
It does not STOP
Its on our roads
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Lyn Paul
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Yiyan Han 28 October 2020

We do know WHO the invisible enemy is But not many people dare to seek it's hiding place Thanks for this 5+ piece

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 October 2020

A well authored poem. Truly magnificent....5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

Our present time 'Race' is a war that looms everywhere; its true! When the war is everywhere, we do not know where to begin and where to end to fight the war. Respect to all those slain in the two Great Wars!

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Smoky Hoss 24 August 2020

Awesome! It is a race... rat race, of the human race.

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Anjandev Roy 19 August 2020

Great observation.....well composed....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 August 2020

A powerful and thought provoking poem. Yes, war is everywhere. We don't even know whom to fight and what we are fighting for. It is indeed a race...a survival of the fittest. I hope we can still find meaning for this life and give justice to those who fought for us and sacrificed their lives in World War 1 and World War 2. Beautifully conveyed and crafted.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 August 2020

On POWER All the fighters who fought for us in World War 1 and World War 2 We salute you. We are now fighting to compete with something uncontrollable. Its A race.........excellent; expressive

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Deluke Muwanigwa 15 August 2020

Yah we should stop fighting. Make love not war.

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Tony Karas 15 August 2020

An excellent write. War IS everywhere.

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