Tuesday, October 2, 2012

War In Her Wedding Gown Comments

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War in her wedding gown
The bride of the world
Waiting for her groom to come
Some say its a conjugal bliss
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James T. Abel Adesitimi
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James T. Abel Adesitimi 06 October 2012

No, I used she to represent war i.e personification. And her groom is peace The last line says, thereafter her groom will come to the scene to appease her i.e when peace comes, war will be calmed. Thanks for the comment

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Teslim Badmus 06 October 2012

u tried, it is lovely but is she a goddess needed to be appease.y cant u try other words as rescue, grace or elevate.

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Babalola Augustine Adeola 05 October 2012

Hmmm... A nice one brother. I appreciate your opinion

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