Monday, June 27, 2011

War Child Comments

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Little girl, trying to sleep in your bed
don’t listen to the sound of the bombs nearby
just close your eyes and try not to cry
and let your brother sing you a lullaby.
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Tim Kitchen
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Connie Yost 22 May 2013

Oh, what a beautiful expression of love in this, Tim. Thank you.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 June 2011

Very vivid images and sounds of the tragedy of war, there's a cutting intensity in your word choice that produces a deep sadness (and connection) for the reader towards the subject -'the girl'. Great write! 10+++++++

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 June 2011

Very vivid images and sounds of the tragedy of war, there's a cutting intensity in your word choice that produces a deep sadness (and connection) for the reader towards the subject -'the girl'. Great write! 10+++++++

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